Storm
07-20-2008, 05:05 AM
well i have been making a naruto like story that i called 'Extreme Behavior' and i thought why not let you guys help me? so here it is so far
“ Ahh its good to be working as a ninja again its so exhilarating!!”
said Dylon a young blond pretty good looking man. You know the tall dark and Handsome thing? Well that basically was him all over but he wasn’t dark skinned. He had a nice whitey blond goatee ( it was died that way). It was his stile. He also liked to call himself storm. Because he specialized in wind ,rain, lightening hail ,snow and heaps more.
“ Ahh man this rain will blow my cother. Better send it away so I can get in there easy.”
he Said while sitting in a tree situated near a possible enemy stronghold surrounded by masked ninjas like himself but they had no ninja headbands on there foreheads ( which meant they where not official ninjas )
“storm controlling jutsu!!” whispered Dylon commanding the wind to blow the clouds away.
There was also something else about Dylon the thing is he also has a great and dangerous spirit inside of also named storm it was a great dragon who commanded the sky. The thing is whenever Dylon gets angry this spirits chakra flows trough his body. Dylon is able to summon this great dragon to his side almost any time he wants but it was hard for him to control this magnificent beast so he only summoned it when he really needed it. Usually he carried out his missions in a group of 4 but this time he was on his own because the Raikage (head of his village) wanted him to investigate this place on his own this time. Dylon wasn’t Shaw if the Wokage wanted him dead or what but all the same he was getting paid a lot for bringing back as much info as could.
“Better head in before daybreak comes. All rite here I go!” whispered Dylon to himself. He flew in and used his hidden mist jutsu to take out the ninjas on guard. He sliced trough the ninjas armor and bodies with his twin Katana swords like the where made out of silk. Finally he got to the door of the stronghold. Concentrated on the covalence cameras as took information from them and then destroyed them in an instant with just his mind power. He was in the main meeting room and listening to a meeting getting held in the blink of an eye. They where talking about assassinating his village. The village hidden in the clouds.
“ ive got enough info now better go” so he used his transportation jutsu and he was back in the Raikage’s office in a second or two
“ so Dylon what did you find out for me. It had better be good. You have permission to speak in case you didn’t figure that out” asked the Raikage in a board manner
“well yes I did figure that much out”
“just get on with it” interrupted the Raikage
“ ok sorry sir. The enemy is planning an attack on our village. But I wouldn’t worry sir we are clearly much stronger than they are. They do not have very strong ninjas and they aren’t real qualified ninjas. There just normal people really.” stated storm to the Raikage.
“Yes but remember Dylon you should never under estimate the enemy.” quoted the Raikage.
“Hmmm true.” said Dylon.
“but you do have a good point Dylon. Can you tell all our elite ninjas to prepare for battle Dylon?” asked the Raikage.
“ um yeah sure sir ill be back in a jiffy” said Dylon meaning what he said.
as they got out of there cars they both sensed an evil brewing nearby "tb can you feal that" asked Dylon.
"yes. something’s up here and where going to find out what and then get rid of it"
Ali and Toni where waiting at the old fashioned building. (Ali)"ugh why did yous two drive here when its quicker to jump trough the trees" (Toni) "yea!!" (.Tyler) ugh not again with the car thing how many times do we have to tell yous two" (Dylon) “hmm yes how many times. all right let me put it simple just for you Toni. style ok its called style"
“ Ahh its good to be working as a ninja again its so exhilarating!!”
said Dylon a young blond pretty good looking man. You know the tall dark and Handsome thing? Well that basically was him all over but he wasn’t dark skinned. He had a nice whitey blond goatee ( it was died that way). It was his stile. He also liked to call himself storm. Because he specialized in wind ,rain, lightening hail ,snow and heaps more.
“ Ahh man this rain will blow my cother. Better send it away so I can get in there easy.”
he Said while sitting in a tree situated near a possible enemy stronghold surrounded by masked ninjas like himself but they had no ninja headbands on there foreheads ( which meant they where not official ninjas )
“storm controlling jutsu!!” whispered Dylon commanding the wind to blow the clouds away.
There was also something else about Dylon the thing is he also has a great and dangerous spirit inside of also named storm it was a great dragon who commanded the sky. The thing is whenever Dylon gets angry this spirits chakra flows trough his body. Dylon is able to summon this great dragon to his side almost any time he wants but it was hard for him to control this magnificent beast so he only summoned it when he really needed it. Usually he carried out his missions in a group of 4 but this time he was on his own because the Raikage (head of his village) wanted him to investigate this place on his own this time. Dylon wasn’t Shaw if the Wokage wanted him dead or what but all the same he was getting paid a lot for bringing back as much info as could.
“Better head in before daybreak comes. All rite here I go!” whispered Dylon to himself. He flew in and used his hidden mist jutsu to take out the ninjas on guard. He sliced trough the ninjas armor and bodies with his twin Katana swords like the where made out of silk. Finally he got to the door of the stronghold. Concentrated on the covalence cameras as took information from them and then destroyed them in an instant with just his mind power. He was in the main meeting room and listening to a meeting getting held in the blink of an eye. They where talking about assassinating his village. The village hidden in the clouds.
“ ive got enough info now better go” so he used his transportation jutsu and he was back in the Raikage’s office in a second or two
“ so Dylon what did you find out for me. It had better be good. You have permission to speak in case you didn’t figure that out” asked the Raikage in a board manner
“well yes I did figure that much out”
“just get on with it” interrupted the Raikage
“ ok sorry sir. The enemy is planning an attack on our village. But I wouldn’t worry sir we are clearly much stronger than they are. They do not have very strong ninjas and they aren’t real qualified ninjas. There just normal people really.” stated storm to the Raikage.
“Yes but remember Dylon you should never under estimate the enemy.” quoted the Raikage.
“Hmmm true.” said Dylon.
“but you do have a good point Dylon. Can you tell all our elite ninjas to prepare for battle Dylon?” asked the Raikage.
“ um yeah sure sir ill be back in a jiffy” said Dylon meaning what he said.
as they got out of there cars they both sensed an evil brewing nearby "tb can you feal that" asked Dylon.
"yes. something’s up here and where going to find out what and then get rid of it"
Ali and Toni where waiting at the old fashioned building. (Ali)"ugh why did yous two drive here when its quicker to jump trough the trees" (Toni) "yea!!" (.Tyler) ugh not again with the car thing how many times do we have to tell yous two" (Dylon) “hmm yes how many times. all right let me put it simple just for you Toni. style ok its called style"