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[fiqe]

http://www.signaturebar.com/uploads/images/18346.jpg (http://www.signaturebar.com/)

need tips... got a request but this is too simple i think...

[hubdehub]

nice focal point , some more color flow and it will rock

[fiqe]

what do u mean with colour flow?

u mean with the sudden apearens of black?

[hubdehub]

the contrast between the bg and render is to big , in other words it looks like the render is just dropped on it .

Try to get something in front of it and blend it in , light source or brushes .
Gradients can help a lot to get some more color flow also.

did it quick just to show you the difference

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c130/hubdehub/18346f.png

colors do match more and by adding something in front you get depht and thats sweet , the editing is not great just a quick job to show you

or even better , try to work on B&W the color flow is there so you can focus on Fx first and ad color when you manage this new style you have.
Bg and render have to match and thats a yourney of no end :)

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c130/hubdehub/18346h.jpg

[lokifeyson]

sound advice hub! :D

[fiqe]

ye i get wat u mean but that was kinda the point... to make the text and render stand out and dont blend in with the bg.... :?

but i see what u mean.. :)