My first LP

[zanbatsu-kun]

Ok, this is my first large art, i would reaaaally like some c+c on this thing here :D

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/3210/leelcopyweeeeeeed1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Etha]

I think you did a great job, I can't really think of anything to point out...hmmm....maybe there would have been a lil less splatter under her...but I think it looks fine, lol. I'm just reaching for somethin =P

Oh, and maybe in the top right corner there could be another like little box cutout of her mouth or somethin.

Great job, man =]

[zanbatsu-kun]

Thanks, any other?

[AmmocK]

ooo i like it
only feels a lil too bright
very nice stuff zan

[zanbatsu-kun]

yeah, it felt a bit too bright, but photoshop crashed on me so i had to cut it close

[noobie]

I really like that, great work hun.

[-bH.munky]

Wow that's great zanba but like etha said maybe another clipping mask in the top right corner showing her mouth.