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silversniper
01-01-2010, 07:54 PM
here guys all this one took was one word touch to put the text in.
http://i48.tinypic.com/smvlgy.png
tell me what i could do to inprove it.

+dd. `aNime~>kiNg
01-02-2010, 02:08 AM
imo u need to look at some of our tuts on the site this is very plain and also u need to work on text placement :)
there are alot of tuts that will help u so go for it:)

KIU

silversniper
01-02-2010, 05:22 AM
k thanks for the head's up i no i need some work.

+Os. vegito2010
01-02-2010, 05:42 AM
text isint that good... and are userbars that big?

silversniper
01-02-2010, 04:37 PM
user bar? thats a user bar?

+Os. 健秋生や。
01-02-2010, 04:44 PM
user bar? thats a user bar?

No.

But you posted it in the Userbar section.

l3g3nd™²
01-02-2010, 09:30 PM
Yeah u posted it in the wrong section.

IMO u need some work, the text placement is wrong, try messing around with the text as-well. Maybe add some effects but remember to keep it simple, also try blending the render by smudging the render round the edges a little. And I'm not sure about the light in the right corner. It's really random, but keep it up, and follow tuts,u will eventually get there. (:

silversniper
01-03-2010, 07:05 PM
oh opp's srry.

Cdn
01-04-2010, 05:41 PM
Some suggestions: The render isn't that well cut. Text is very bad. The render doesn't blend with the BG.


I agree, some Tuts would help you a lot.