Poster for a site.

[Afflicted]

This flyer was created for another site so they could advertise at a convention. Any feedback welcome. :)
http://i32.tinypic.com/14uuuc6.jpg

[Hopz]

So what is your request ? O.O

[-bH.munky]

He isn't making a request, he wants feedback for his flyer.

That flyer is ace man, nice work!!!

[+Os. bingobango]

sigbar rules :)

[Sn00p]

http://i32.tinypic.com/14uuuc6.jpg

your pic rules :D nice job :D

thanks ,
-Sn00p-

[Afflicted]

Thanks a lot guys for the comments! I felt like it was a little empty, so I added a bit to it. Tell me what you think!

Version 2: http://i31.tinypic.com/2pq058h.jpg

[CrazzzyMe]

the yellow makes it stand out more.. i like it

[Hopz]

V1 is cool =] Nice work!

[Afflicted]

Thanks guys. So, do you consider version 1 better Hopz?

[Sn00p]

i like the v2 better
gj dude
http://i31.tinypic.com/2pq058h.jpg

[Kangaroo]

the colors of the renders realy clash with the background (ie the purple w/ bright red/ w yellow/ dont work) and the smudging needs some work. other than that, its a good grunge bg and text. try to use renders w/ a more subtle tone shift instead of going from red to purple. (red is a realy warm color and the purple you have there is a cool one so it throws off the perception.) hope this helps

[Afflicted]

Thank you for all the comments and feedback guys, it really helped out. And after listening to various feedback from a bunch of different people.. I've created a version 3 which I think is much improved overall, although I still think it's missing something.

Version 3: http://i32.tinypic.com/2q20hlk.jpg

Tell me what you think! :D

[Yukushii]

Ryuk FTW! =D

[-bH.munky]

V3, no clashing colours, good job.

[Sn00p]

v3 is really nice as munky said no colours clashing :D

[Kangaroo]

munky didnt say that i did v_v but good job so far. i think the reason you think its missing somthing is the bottom left. its just a solid block color and it decreases the depth a lot because its more vibrant than the rest. try doing some grunge work over it to give it some texture in a lighter tone. that should do the trick ^_^

[-bH.munky]

V3, no clashing colours, good job.

I just quoted myself for you kangaroo :).

[lokifeyson]

bottom left has a gradient to whiter and is suppose to be a cloud :)

with the renders popping out, so maybe put some more cloudy type things there, but I think its fine...oh actually the bottom left render is basically a big black blob, maybe change that :)

[Kangaroo]

v_v DONT JUDGE ME! lmfao, sry bout that one munk ^_^